Neat idea with the snake, and good for Harry to be able to do something for Snape.
Hmm, do you know, I read it in half the speed as I usually do so that the chapter may last longer? Whatever, I am not criticising you.
Nice chapter. I wonder why Voldemort didn't do this before, surely he had had more time to do so?
Anyway, I liked this chapter. They didn't use any curse on Harry, did they? Just Muggle torture, right?
Oh, I was just curious, is there any possibility that you are going to continue any of your currently discontinued stories? I am getting tired of checking them every single week.
Author's Response: I do hope to continue/finish some of the other stories, but it will be awhile. The only one I am actively working on at present us Death Wish. The others are on hold. If you "follow" the story, you will receive an update when I post a new chapter.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 19 Sep 2017 3:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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poor Severus and Harry :( hope Severus is able to heal Harry, looking forward to reading the next chapter
Eesh, do you have a life ambition to leave of chapters in a cliff hanger? I was distantly happy and giddy that you had updated this chapter after so long, (Long for you, of course, usually you update within four days) All that giddiness vanished the moment I saw the cliff hanger. I can just hope that you post the new chapter faster than you did this one. Do you have the story already written and completed or are you going with the flow, if you are going with the flow, then I have no problem with the time lapse, but if you have it completed, then please try to set a proper time interval. Whatever, I loved this chapter too, the moment I saw a notification that a new chapter had been posted, I screamed in delight, so loud my brothers evening milk glass went flying with the force of gravity. (Luckily it was empty or I would have been in for it.)
Author's Response: Yes I try to end in a cliff hanger. Evil, I know. Keeps readers coming back for more. I slowed down updates on this one because I only have one more chapter completed. Mindscape was written in full in 3 weeks so that will continue fast updates. I am supposed to be crafting for a huge HP festival next month where I am a vendor. I also have two other HPSS stories that I am writing and several more ideas, but I won't post a new long story until Mindscape is completely up. I have posted several other HPSS stories on fanfiction.net (light slash) and AO3 (heavy slash), mostly all hurt-comfort of course, to tide you over if you can manage the romantic pairing.
| Title: Chapter 7
| 14 Sep 2017 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written but hard to bear Harry's pain! Thank you
| Title: Chapter 6
| 14 Sep 2017 8:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very tense but lovely chapter thank you
Well, I am reading this chapter again, I love this one, one of my favourites till now. I would be delighted to see all this from Severus' perspective, I want to hear what would he be thinking of Harry's constant screaming and begging. reading it the second time proved to be more gruesome than the first. The way you described Harry's bones snapping made my heart ache with pity. A really nice work. (This is my second review on this chapter, just tells how much I love this story.)
Eeesh! That was some chapter. I hope that Severus understands that Harry has gone into a flashback, will help him in feeling less disturbed. He could have stunned Harry before applying the potion. Well, you had already stated that you like tortured heroes in your bio, the are one of my favourites too, so this chapter was good (main reason I read this story). I guess you will slowly reveal some things that happened to Harry in his captivity, right? You see, small flashbacks, memories, nightmares etc.
The story is going pretty nice and the updates are fast, love it till now!
This chapter is mostly healing, but I like it nonetheless. I guess the people who stunned Poppy were either Draco, Crabbe, Goyle or some other Death Eaters. I am surprised they let her go after just stunning and obliviating her, I thought that they were going to torture her for information, but I am glad they didn't. You update pretty fast, keep it up but also try to increase the length a little.
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