I would like to say that I really love this series and that I think that you did an outstanding job of creating a mentor/student, father figure/ son relationship between Severus and Harry. I will be looking forward to future updates. Keep up the amazing work!! :)
Have to say this story doesn't make pleasant reading -but its strangely compelling nonetheless.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 05 Sep 2017 8:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved how Severus gave Harry his independance but cared for him at the same time, very sensitive. What a contrast to Dumbledore! Thank you a good chapter
Poor Harry :(
Great chapter!
Well, Snape better be sure that when Harry wakes, he is not alone in the new safe house, Snape might find him unconscious from a panic attack.
The story is quite nice. Harry is quite strong, I might have committed suicide by now. The story is going pretty nicely and the updates are fast. Keep it up. Waiting for the next chapter.
The story is going pretty nice, I liked the plot. Well, it is quite nice that now Severus's cover is blown, he won't have to pretend to hate Harry in class anymore. Though I must say that I don't like a bald Harry, maybe you can do something about it, a hair growth spell perhaps?
| Title: Chapter 4
| 03 Sep 2017 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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How indeed? A great chapter thank you
Poor, poor Harry. It's so in character to have him worry about someone other than himself while he is in so much pain as well. I liked that he was adamant about speaking about the potential danger to Snape, and the touch of humor that you included when the adults misunderstood Harry's meaning when he said that he had feelings for Snape. That helped to cut some of the intensity of this chapter, and it worked well.
Great chapter. Looking forward to what comes next!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 29 Aug 2017 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What a cliffie! Thank you, a lot of tension and of course lots of angst a brilliant chapter
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