Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Title: Chapter 19 12 Dec 2017 9:26 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter and the decorations but worried that an owl was born so late in the year!
Title: Chapter 19 09 Dec 2017 10:41 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    That, um, that ended very abruptly, so, christmas is coming!!!!
    Oh yeah! You must be so so so excited! I was just so happy to know that you updated today!
    I loved this chapter, the last one and this one had been quite light, something that I think both Harry and us readers needed. Keep writing!
Title: Chapter 18 06 Dec 2017 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the ending, great fun thank you a lighter chapter with a little humour
Title: Chapter 17 06 Dec 2017 9:41 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very difficult to read but very well written thank you
Title: Chapter 18 04 Dec 2017 6:56 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, at last a sweet chapter that doesn't end in Harry or us crying!
    I love you, this was sufficiently long! Eagerly waiting!
    I want more angst! I love it, we don't get the value of a thing until we lose it, this chapter was missing angst, so I missed it, anyway, I like some good days too, when Harry can just sit back and relax.
Title: Chapter 17 04 Dec 2017 5:58 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    No update this week? I am so disappointed. I have read the whole story again! Yay! Had forgotten a few things, but they are now quite fresh in my mind! Eagerly waiting! Keep writing!

    I want to hear Snape sing! How wonderful would it be, wouldn't it? I love this so effing much! I love your story! I love this with all my heart!

    Take your time, okay, just don't ever finish this story, i won't be able to bear it if you did. Also, I wonder what you have planned for Christmas. In the story.
Title: Chapter 17 04 Dec 2017 5:58 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    No update this week? I am so disappointed. I have read the whole story again! Yay! Had forgotten a few things, but they are now quite fresh in my mind! Eagerly waiting! Keep writing!

    I want to hear Snape sing! How wonderful would it be, wouldn't it? I love this so effing much! I love your story! I love this with all my heart!

    Take your time, okay, just don't ever finish this story, i won't be able to bear it if you did. Also, I wonder what you have planned for Christmas. In the story.
Title: Chapter 17 25 Nov 2017 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor harry! Very well written
Title: Chapter 17 25 Nov 2017 7:41 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is just so, just so broken............
    I almost sobbed in despair for Harry, poor Harry.
    Don't read further if you are of a faint heart.
    Lets hear what I will do if I ever get the chance to torture the Death Eaters who tortured Harry. I'll chain them first, then use the Cruciatus Curse until they either lost consciousness or their voices broke. Then I would take a bucket full of maggots and force feed it to them. Slowly, I will cut of their toes and fingers before feeding that to them too. After that, I will take a candle and burn the stubs of there toes and fingers. After that, I will use the Cruciatus curse again, then I will take a bucketful of centipedes and cockroach and dump it on them. Then I will drown them, you know, keep on spraying water on their faces so that they can't breath. After that, I will take a belt and whip them raw. Before cutting of their remaining hands and feets and burning there stumps too. The Cruciatus curse again, before I make jagged cuts all across their body and spraying lemon juice on them. I will continue this routine until there is nothing left to cut and then burn them alive!! Muahahahaha! That felt good to write.

    Such a great chapter! A bit smaller than the last, but great nonetheless. Poor poor HArry, I want to see Snape doing something to them, really.
Title: Chapter 16 21 Nov 2017 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely positive chapter until the end, what flashback has been started now? Not a good one I think! Thank you for a lovely chapter

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5