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Title: Chapter 16 18 Nov 2017 10:16 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, things were going so well! Eager to know what happened. :O
Title: Chapter 16 18 Nov 2017 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, you had to end the chapter on a bad note AND a cliffhanger??
    What do you have against readers?
    Whatever, to tell the truth, the moment I saw the notification that you have updated a chapter, I literally cried out with surprise and delight. I was expecting the chapter on Moday, like you had posted earlier, nevertheless, I was pleasantly delighted!! Oh lalalalala! I love you!!
    I was practically giddy with joy throughout the chapter just because you updated, this is absolutely my favourite in process fanfiction!1
    Couple it with a cup of hot chocolate.... Mummmmmmmmhmmmhhhmmm.....
    Anyway, I am an Indian and have never celebrated a full on christmas, and it looks just so much fun!!!!!! I wanna cut down a tree too!! Gosh, it doesn't even snow in the place we live, can life get any more boring?
    *sigh* I will have to make a do with reading then.
    You seem to know a aweful lot about setting up christmas trees, I have decorated them, but only very small about two feet tall? Artificial ones, they were not as much fun as this seems to be.
    Anyway, I will be so eagerly waiting for an update!
    So, there is gonna be a sequel, right? After all, you said that Harry's healing was the climax of this story, so Voldemort's defeat should be the focus of the sequel. And don't you dare answer me with a denial!
Title: Chapter 15 14 Nov 2017 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. Good sense of claustrophobia they are feeling in this chapter
Title: Chapter 15 13 Nov 2017 11:40 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry seems so (pathetic) sad. I pity him very much, I don't know how Severus is getting annoyed at the boy. He was tortured for Merlin's Sake!
    Severus! You should be more considerate, its not about trust, the fact that he is not safe any where was TORTURED into him, of course it will take some time to sway him from that notion!
    Let him be, you are making him study for, what? 5 hours? I don't study for more than 3 hours a day! And, if I were in harry's place, I won't be able to function properly let alone study. I might already be dead by the rate we are going, Harry is quite strong if I must say. (suicide, life would be too difficult.)
    A lovely chapter, waiting for the next one.
    PS: Would Voldemort be defeated in this story? Or will there be another sequel?
Title: Chapter 14 07 Nov 2017 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Lyzasnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. I hope you feel better soon!!
Title: Chapter 14 06 Nov 2017 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a lovely chapter especially with Dobby at the end! I wish you well and hope the doctors have found a way to treat you. Get well soon!
Title: Chapter 13 06 Nov 2017 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I assume this is a dream at least I hope so! Thank goodness I can read the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 14 06 Nov 2017 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, you wrote Dobby's character so well!!
    I can't wait for the next chapter, but still, get well soon!!
    I recently got sick, and believe me, I won't wish that on anyone. Maybe except Voldemort. And Bellatrix. And Umbridge.
    Anyway, I hope you get well soon!! I was about to start writing when I got a notification and then Boom! and Clash!! Everything down, start reading. A bit small chapter, but I love it.
    Seriously though,no one is going to come, right? Harry is just being paranoid, right?
Title: Chapter 13 29 Oct 2017 1:03 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Gosh, Severus's nightmare was horrible, but I guess Harry's nightmares were even more terrible. Is there something more to when Harry's fainted for a couple of seconds.
    How was your HP festival? I wish there were such things in our country too..................
    I had almost forgotten that they had had only four days in the safe house. It feels like months. Anyway, the next chapter in a week? Great. I will be waiting.
Title: Chapter 12 15 Oct 2017 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent chapter

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