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Reviews For Lily's Lost Boys
Thank God you grew Harry's hair, even when his head was shaved, I never imagined him bald. (but he was handsome) I hope you have fun in the HP festival. I will be waiting for the new chapter. I like the way Harry mentions some of the torture day by day, I can't believe that it had been just a few days since the rescue. I wonder what is happening in the Wizarding World? Lets see! Thanks for the extra long chapter, as a writer I know how difficult they are.
Centipedes! Urgh! I hate them, they make me shiver and want to vomit and gag. *Shudder*. I did not need the visuals........... Arrrrggghehheh!!!! I hate it! But you have already said that this is dark, maybe you can add gross to it too? At first I hadn't thought that Muggle torture could have been effective, after all, Wizards have the Cruciatus curse, though I don't really know how that feels (Not that I want to.) but reading what you have written, I ma eating up my words. Poor Harry, the trauma is so great, and written so beautifully. Keep writing, loving it! Centipedes......... *moans*
Behold her, single in the field, Yon solitary Highland Lass! Reaping and singing by herself; Stop here, or gently pass! Yeah, I know nothing to do with the story but I am mad. Ola! I was so happy to see the notification on my email that you have updated that I literally pushed my brother off the computer to read it. Poor Harry. (I like a poor and suffering Harry) Finally, took Snape long enough to find out that Harry is not like James. Any idea ow long this story is? I want it to go on forever! But alas, every story has to stop somewhere. (Stories don't end, ever.) This again reminded me of another verse. (Poem) There is no such thing as a happy ending Endings are the saddest part So just give me a happy middle and a very happy start. I am feeling quite poetic today. I don't like a happy middle, so I guess all the stories should be sad.................. Whatever, I liked this chapter. Sorry I didn't love it as nothing actually happened, it was just a kind of filler, but nonetheless, I liked it. Is there going to be more action? I guess you should just put up recovery an healing in this story and the vanquishing of the Dark Lord should be left for the next story in the series. Though that is your wish, you story. I love it the way it is! Author's Response: Is there going to be more action? Hmm... I'm not sure how to answer that. The recovery and the healing IS the action in this story. I have the ending written. I don't have the middle section complete.
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