Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Fuck you, Potter! 01 Dec 2018 2:33 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. That was fast. Way too fast. I think there needs to be more development first. Harry is understanding and forgiving, but I don’t think he would flip all the way around that fast. Seeing his rival in distress might start to make him see Draco differently, but I don’t think he would be able to make that leap yet. Both of them are really hard headed. Even if Harry could make the leap, I think Draco would punch him. Or vice versa.

    But it’s okay. I wonder what Snape is doing.
Title: How it Started 01 Dec 2018 2:26 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that there is more to read so fast.

    Everyone seems in character. The Potter- Malfoy rivalry is present and full of fire. Very good. Now they have another thing to be jealous of over each other - Professor Snape. Poor Snape, I have a feeling he is in for a rough summer.

    I like where the story is going, but Snape did seem to adapt to the situation too fast. How does he know Draco can stay with him? Doesn’t he want to figure things out first, like why Draco is even there?

    The dialogue is good. Id like to see more thoughts from the characters though. And more descriptions. Descriptions are the richness of the story. :)
Title: It changes 01 Dec 2018 2:21 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s a good start for Snape and Harry. Very plausible. I liked how the situation was explained quickly as a way of looking back. Most people are not able to accomplish that as well as you did.

    It as a super short chapter, I wanted more.

    Draco’s story needs a little more work to make it seem in character of his parents. The main traits they have are being snobs and loving their son. If they hid him away for his safety without explaining it to him, it would make sense. Like if something went wrong, and then they were taken over by demons or something and Draco was forgotten, but safe like the original Malfoy’s planned.

    But overall, good start. I’m interested in seeing where this goes.
Title: Fuck you, Potter! 28 Nov 2018 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    thank for new chapie!!
Title: How it Started 17 Feb 2018 4:20 pm
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapie!! hope to see more, soon! hope your february is going good!
Title: It changes 08 Dec 2017 12:47 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    looking forward to reading more about draco & harry!!

    Author's Response: As long as I keep getting validated, you will :)

    Author's Response: As long as I keep getting validated, you will :)
Title: It changes 07 Dec 2017 8:09 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixMalfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm intrigued to see how this story is going to turn out. I wonder how you'll have Draco and Harry's relationship (will they become friends and brothers?).

    Keep it up, please :)

    Author's Response: I will, thanks:) Would you like them to become friends, brothers, or more? ;)

    Author's Response: I will, thanks:) Would you like them to become friends, brothers, or more? ;)
Title: It changes 06 Dec 2017 12:12 pm
Reviewer: lunadistruggi (Signed) [Report This]
    oh yes!!! i want to read more and more about this story!! this is only a little taste... XD i hope you will continue because i love it!!!

    Author's Response: I will! I want you, and everyone else opinion- should Draco and Harry become friends, brothers, or something more? ;)

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