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Reviews For The Funny Way of Family
It as a super short chapter, I wanted more. Draco’s story needs a little more work to make it seem in character of his parents. The main traits they have are being snobs and loving their son. If they hid him away for his safety without explaining it to him, it would make sense. Like if something went wrong, and then they were taken over by demons or something and Draco was forgotten, but safe like the original Malfoy’s planned. But overall, good start. I’m interested in seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: As long as I keep getting validated, you will :) Author's Response: As long as I keep getting validated, you will :)
Keep it up, please :) Author's Response: I will, thanks:) Would you like them to become friends, brothers, or more? ;) Author's Response: I will, thanks:) Would you like them to become friends, brothers, or more? ;)
Author's Response: I will! I want you, and everyone else opinion- should Draco and Harry become friends, brothers, or something more? ;) |
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