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I'm not sure what the significance of Ginny's absence from the dining table is. Did you originally intend for Ginny to have died, and then change your mind and replace her with Colin Creevey?
I think the story ends rather abruptly. I don't think it needs a sequel, but I would have liked just one more scene, where the characters recuperate and discuss what they have just experienced, including reactions to Harry's having defeated that same basilisk on his own at age 12, discussion of Gryffindor's sword, and reflections on Harry's patronus. Everything goes by so fast that the characters don't have an awful lot of time to consider the revelations, and I would like to see how they handle them and if they change anything about the way they interact with Harry.
"You wrote one of my favorite fics, and now this jewel." you say and I wonder if you know the power you wild with those words....
To be one someone's favorite fics? I'm deeply honored. Thank you for telling me that <3
Me ha encantado esta historia, todos los personajes y la forma en como has estructurado todo.
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Author's Response: Epa, un review en español! Me agarró super de sorpresa. Me alegro mucho que lo hayas disfrutado :)
I appreciate it a lot that you took the time to come back to review.
Most of the times when we download stuff for later we forgetto do so. I myself am gilty of that, at least.
It's only after I started posting online that I realised how much the author feeds of this reviews , and learned to do what you just now did.
Thanky you, thank you, thank you again!! And I'm glad you enjoyed my fic <3
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