Potions and Snitches
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Title: Cleared 24 Jun 2018 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Signed) [Report This]
    Esto es impresionante, he amado cada frase y como has construido el conflicto.

    Sencillamente wow!!!

    Gracias por un inicio épico en lo que promete ser una historia brillante
Title: Cleared 20 Jun 2018 10:58 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, now I NEED more. yep.
Title: Cleared 19 Jun 2018 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very dramatic ending! Thank you a wonderful start to the story
Title: Cleared 19 Jun 2018 2:29 pm
Reviewer: melissascout (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story please update soon!
Title: Cleared 18 Jun 2018 11:49 pm
Reviewer: AshDragon9871 (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I hope there will be more soon!
Title: Cleared 18 Jun 2018 7:54 am
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this idea is totally new and I like it very much! But I don’t understand how Sirius can disown harry as Potter heir? Because sieius is a black and not a direct Potter. So how can this happen?
    I hope you can update very soon. I really want to know what Snape will do.

    Author's Response: I realized when I started that I had to explain in some way how Sirius has the ability to perform such a detrimental action so I hope the next chapter will explain it enough.
Title: Cleared 18 Jun 2018 2:14 am
Reviewer: Pearlk9 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting start to your story.
    Now poor Harry has no one in his corner who cares. To be disinherited by your godfather is so cruel. I guess being in Azkaban has made Sirius even more of a bully than he was as a schoolboy. I’m looking forward to your next chapter.

    Author's Response: I guess the dementors' influence was greater than expected.
Title: Cleared 17 Jun 2018 8:19 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant. What an unusual idea for a story.
Title: Cleared 17 Jun 2018 5:40 am
Reviewer: lilyflower101 (Signed) [Report This]
    You're going to regret this you mangy mutt!!!! I hope that they give this story to Rita Skeeter.
Title: Cleared 16 Jun 2018 6:00 pm
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    *flails*

    OMM!! (O My Merlin)

    Yay Snape! *frets* But Harry! Way to kick him when he's down, Sirius. *growls*

    What's gonna happen!?

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