Very interesting start to your story.
Now poor Harry has no one in his corner who cares. To be disinherited by your godfather is so cruel. I guess being in Azkaban has made Sirius even more of a bully than he was as a schoolboy. I’m looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: I guess the dementors' influence was greater than expected.
Brilliant. What an unusual idea for a story.
You're going to regret this you mangy mutt!!!! I hope that they give this story to Rita Skeeter.
*flails*
OMM!! (O My Merlin)
Yay Snape! *frets* But Harry! Way to kick him when he's down, Sirius. *growls*
What's gonna happen!?
Awesome and exciting start! I haven't read a plotline like this before and I'm quite intrigued. I also appreciate the care you put into establishing the storyline, instead of leaping right into the drama; I got a good feel of Harry's character and his friends at the school, and I loved the interaction with Ginny. Looking forward to next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I did worry about dragging out the beginning, but I'm never comfortable just diving in headfirst. I'm also one of those weird people who actually likes Ginny. Poor girl gets way too much hate.
This is incredibly good! Thanks for using my prompt! I cannot wait to read more!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I do the prompt justice!
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| 16 Jun 2018 8:22 am
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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