Title: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 21 Nov 2022 5:09 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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And just to say that this is the most dark and deranged Rob I’ve ever read. I’m really hoping he gets his comeuppance.
Title: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 21 Nov 2022 5:01 pm
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I hope that you post the rest of your story here on P&S. I’d love to see how Severus approaches his conversation with Harry, and how he ultimately helps Harry.
i have already read this story several times on fanfiction and thought it was rich, imaginative, creative and of course daring. i am really looking forward to seeing it on this site and i encourage you to keep it up. subtlety is an art and i believe you are equal to it. if you have ever watched older movies you can see how the best actors were well versed in nuance and were able to let you know what was happening without being graphic when it came for restricted rating material. j.k. rowling did it as well. if you really pay attention to her wording you can see that harry's abuse was very serious physically as well as psychologically. don't give up. you are very talented and i know you can do it. i can't wait to see how the rest of the chapters come out. read you soon!
I love this story so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
It's been forever since I read the original, so I love reading the rewrite! Confused about his, Mondon's, plan though. Did he hear the Slytherin's talking before the sorting or after? If it was after, why did he want to go into Gryffindor? Will he live up to being a Gryffindor now that his revenge is taken care of? How did the professors make sure he wasn't lying? I imagine he'd be a good liar if Snape can't even intimidate him. Can't wait for the next update!
Title: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 24 Nov 2018 9:12 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I'm sorry that the Ron/Hermione story line came back I hope it is resolved soon. Apart from that I loved the chapter, very well done thank you
Author's Response: It's still in there, just a bit subdued . . .
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