| Title: Harry's Guardian
| 18 May 2020 3:33 am
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| Reviewer: JR89 (Signed)
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I really love your story. I read it about a year and a half ago and didn't realize that you had written more. I love the way you describe things. I never feel like I need more information or am bogged down with useless details. I can't wait to see Harry's relationships develop. I also want to see how the changes to knockturn alley turn out. Great story!
I am loving this fic so far! It's really well paced and well written (you actually had me tearing up at one point!) . The plot with rennovating the alley is something I've never seen done before but works really well. Whilst I'm here for the Severitus, I disagree about the relationship with Dumbledode not being interesting. In my experience reading other fics, his motives are usually very black or white and it's been interesting watching him trying to build a relationship with Harry. Can't wait for more!
Excellent. Update p;ease. I love Harry trying to fix Magical Society.
I love this story including the Dumbledore harry dynamic. Can't wait for the next update.
I’m hooked and hoping for more soon.
I like the awkward Harry and dumbledore relationship it's not something I've read before with albus taking his responsibility of Harry seriously I am looking forward to see how their relationship develops.
Ugh snape stills annoys me he never a sees what's right in front of him just what he wants to see I hope he grows up soon Harry deserves people who care about him.
I love all the knockturn/Payne alley stuff it's fascinating.
Thank you for such a lovely and unique fic.
Anxiously and excitedly awaiting an update.
I like this and am hoping you will continue with it.
Love your writing and how much your characters seem like people.
Am keen to read more of any part of this world; Harry's relationship with Dumbledore is not the part I am most interested in, but if the story was only the bits I'm most interested in it would be incomplete and lacking dimension and detail.
Thanks for sharing this!
Love this so far! Cant wait to see where you take us next
| Title: Harry's Guardian
| 10 Jul 2019 2:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Inuki (Signed)
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I just wanted to write you that I very much enjoy this story. I have read it more than once.
Quite often Harry just gets told he is rich and does stuff and everyone is bending backwards because he is Lord Soundso. I like that you show his learning curve, the suspicion he faces and how while he is capable of looking after himself, Harry does wish for a family to look after him.
I don't mind reading about Harry and Dumbledore's relationship, I am looking forward to the two of them forming a relationship with Snape.
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