Absolutely loved descriptions of all the brooms! And, oh! can I relate to Justin's glass cleaning!!! I used to work retail furniture, and people ALWAYS had to test the thickness of the glass-topped tables, leaving fingerprints top & bottom! But there was a 2-year-old girl who actually LICKED every glass table she came to, leaving toddler SLIME on the glass! Some of the nastiest stuff I ever had to clean in that lovely store! Poor Justin!
You updated!!!
I always thought this was abandoned at a bad spot. One chapter earlier would have felt more complete.
Harry really has to learn not to spend so impulsively. I know he has a lot. But that is a common problem with people who gain money fast. They spend it and then it is gone. But old money is for future generations as well.
I hope we will see Snape teaching him. But I don't know if he is much better at that than Harry.
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| 23 Jul 2021 8:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting take on the dementor attack. I don’t think I’ve read any story where Dumbledore apologised to the students, a good idea, thank you.
Great chapter. I especially enjoyed the different brooms. I hope Snape stays engaged now that school has started, and that Sirius will get to settle into Harry’s new digs soon.
I really liked the dementors bit, excited for the next chapter!
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