I loved this chapter! This is such a great idea for a story. I haven’t seen a story like this.
I always love reading your stories. I was so glad when I entered the site to see a new story by you!
I always love reading your stories. I was so glad when I entered the site to see a new story by you!
I loved this chapter! Keep it coming!
This is a really great Independent!Harry fic... the trial is going to be interesting!
| Title: The Snort
| 19 Aug 2018 11:02 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great idea of Harry's, and you of course, I hope this will make Severus think a little but I fear it will make him even more angry! Very mean of Dumbledore to bring Severus along as he will make Harry to be reckless and immature, I'm thinking of the flying car incident especially. Thank you for a great chapter.
Brilliant. I wish we could see it from Snape's POV.
Just one small correction, I hope you don't mind. You've spelled quiet as quite (when harry has just entered the courtroom)
Author's Response: Fixed the spelling error. Thanks.
| Title: Responsibility
| 18 Aug 2018 9:12 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Can't wait to read it! I love Harry's way of doing business and how pod more and silver are helping him thank you
| Title: The Head Of Slytherin And The Headmaster
| 18 Aug 2018 8:48 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter.
You are, in my opinion, the very best writer on this site. Your ideas for story line, the insight into Harry's thoughts, perfect mix of angst and fluff.I wonder how Snape is going to react to the soon-to-be-coming changes at the orphanage. I love Tilly and Miss. Ginger and Ava as well.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Too much angst is too hard on the readers (and characters), so there has to be some fluff to smooth it all over between bouts of angst :)
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