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Reviews For Building Doors
This chapter was really good and showed Harry's character really well. I can slowly see Snape changing and beginning to see Harry differently. The bazaar was a brilliant idea and hope to see book fairs coming to as I can't imagine Basil and Bennett not taking advantage of wanting to sell more books and I think they'd be fair enough to invite their competitor from Knockturn.
I thought this chapter was very well written. Thanks for giving us a few extra pov’s a Harry seems in too much of a fog to pay attention to what all is going on. When will Albus & Severus discover exactly what Harry sees during dementor attacks? Or is it Remus or Poppy who will find out first? Perhaps Ron & Hermione will spill the beans. Will we hear any more from Justin, or was he just a summer friend? Thanks so much again. Your writing is always so fantastic! I know Sirius is typically absent for most of PoA, but I hope we will see some more from him soon.
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