Wonderful chapter. Your descriptions of Sweden and Kall Hus are vivid, and your characterization of Aunt Aggie is brilliant. I loved the subtlety of the interactions and emotions in this chapter.
I LOVE Aunt Agatha. And I love how she can make Snape all uncomfortable and tense, wanting her approval but also having to face his failures. Wow. So much subtext. I loved what Harry was able to understand. And now I really want to know what the cottage is like. I wonder if she would of had Snape stay there if Harry hadn't come along.
I love the exploration of feelings in this chapter, love it. You describe and hint at them very well. Fantastic writing. What a glorious little nugget of story so far. This is quickly becoming my current favorite. Thank you! And, Write on!
I would think that it would be prudent to inform aunt Aggie that Henrik will be going to his new foster family after the winter holiday and to not expect him again. Yes, it would be shooting himself in the foot for ‘his decisions’, but it would be better to get that particular argument out of the way quickly. It would be worse for Severus to be welcomed back into the fold for ‘his child’s’ sake, after all. A teacher at a boarding school has no time or ability to be a proper (single) parent, after all. (I support single parents, but for the sake of this story...)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 03 Oct 2018 5:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter you described the house and atmosphere really well thank you so much
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