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Reviews For Time to Choose
Like this is how good your story is .. and I really can’t wait to see 5 years old harry moments with papa Severus! I’m also intrigued about the whole time travel mystery (my guess is that it’s either Eline or Agatha who obleviated Severus or crazier.. Harry himself) !!! And how with his lost memory will harry be able to handle the time travel and it’s impact on him.. I can’t wait for the legal battle between Snape and and Dolores! (I don’t think she will be easy to overthrow) I’m curious as to how you will make Snape his lagal guardian without compromising his position And how will harry react to all these changes once he regains his memories Ooff a-lot to unpack but I’ll be waiting patiently for your next chapter. Thank you very much for this awesome story!
I can’t believe I never read this before!! Wow, I really don’t know where to start, there are a lot of things I want to say but they are so packed in my head that I’m unable to express them into words! But lets start Your writing style is phenomenal!!! The language and wording you choose is just sophisticated and adds to the characters and story, And the way you describe the scene is like showing it through a vintage videotape … I find my self able to follow your description and envision what you describe vividly!! The characters are also spot on (I especially enjoy how you explored characters complexity in a way that expands on thier canon version but not deviating so much that it feels unbelievable , an example is this paragraph you wrote that I was just taken by “Guilt and remorse were both emotions that the leader of the Light could ill-afford in these troubled times. As Dumbledore stepped out of the Floo and terminated the connection between Spinner’s End and the Headmaster’s Office, he squared his shoulders and straightened his posture in defiance of his true feelings.” Yes Albus is one of the few really complex characters in the story originally and I find it really unbelievable when authors assign to him the bad manipulative persona only?! very few manage to strike a balance in his protrial ((I really do believe he cared for harry deeply, but alas that is a conversation for reddit😂))) You also manage to develop interrelationships so smoothly that as if it was always meant to be (notably harry and snape’s, snape and albus, snape and his aunt) Now the butter and jam of this story : The PLOT !! and what a fantastic story you have! so full of mystery and complexity that is genuinely enjoyable to read I find myself reading a certain piece over and over again just to try and solve what I can by myself Very enticing and well thought out … that I can't wait to get to the next page … sadly I’ve reached the last chapter but I’m really hopeful you may consider completing it… I have so many questions I need you to answer and I can't wait to see how this story ends Hopefully you read through this all😂
Thanks for the journey!
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