| Title: Chapter 6
| 11 Oct 2018 11:27 am
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, great story. Agatha seems nice. I'm guessing Harry will have many more of those dreams or somethibg-I have a feeling the boy Harry saw is Snape when he stayed there as a child.
Looking forward to resding the next chapter as soon as it's posted.
I LOVE Aunt Agatha. And I love how she can make Snape all uncomfortable and tense, wanting her approval but also having to face his failures. Wow. So much subtext. I loved what Harry was able to understand. And now I really want to know what the cottage is like. I wonder if she would of had Snape stay there if Harry hadn't come along.
I love the exploration of feelings in this chapter, love it. You describe and hint at them very well. Fantastic writing. What a glorious little nugget of story so far. This is quickly becoming my current favorite. Thank you! And, Write on!
Awwww, poor Harry. I hope Snape is starting to soften towards him. I bet Dumbledore's plan is to deage Harry every holiday and have him act as Snape's son. Of course, neither of them are aware of that. Tehe!
Great descriptions of all the emotions Harry is going through - very well done. I am enjoying this story immensely! Thanks for writing and sharing!
I would think that it would be prudent to inform aunt Aggie that Henrik will be going to his new foster family after the winter holiday and to not expect him again. Yes, it would be shooting himself in the foot for ‘his decisions’, but it would be better to get that particular argument out of the way quickly. It would be worse for Severus to be welcomed back into the fold for ‘his child’s’ sake, after all. A teacher at a boarding school has no time or ability to be a proper (single) parent, after all. (I support single parents, but for the sake of this story...)
| Title: Chapter 5
| 03 Oct 2018 5:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter you described the house and atmosphere really well thank you so much
I can definately see snape taking on a strict father roll with Henrik. Harry is in for quite a ride. Keep it up!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 02 Oct 2018 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Why can't the adults see that keeping information from Harry only causes problems. Love the story especially the description of Harry's outfit!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was giggling to myself when I wrote that, especially Harry's imaginings of Voldemort laughing himself to death at Harry's appearance.
Snape doesn't know anything about kids if he expects Henrik to speak only when spoken to and all this other crap. I look forward to potion taking a firmer hold on Harry, for him becoming truly child-like with crying, tantrums and the abuse showing it's ugly teeth.
Author's Response: Ha! Snape always has unrealistic expectations of poor Harry. The potion will definitely have some interesting (and unexpected) effects on Harry! He will still mostly retain his teenager demeanour and personality, otherwise he will behave too far out of character and it's important that Harry is still himself as the relationship develops between him and Snape. That's not to say that there won't be tears, tantrums and trouble.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 27 Sep 2018 3:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear! Not a good move on Harry's part! I wonder where they are going? Thank you a great chapter
Oh boy! Poor Harry, and poor Snape! Sounds like they both are in for a hard time. I hope things will turn around.
Snape seems very patient, it’s good.
I’m loving the story so far, can’t wait to read more! Thanks for writing and posting it to share! Please update when you can. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! This is my first fanfic and I am really enjoying myself as I write. I have been reading all of the stories on here quite avidly for a while now and I love all the wonderful Snape/Harry fics :-)
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