I love your portrayal of Snape from Harry’s semi conscious state.
Dumbledore should have listened to Harry. Having Umbridge write letters to the Dursley’s regularly is new and inventive. All your characters are very in character.
I wonder how Harry will take all the events and whatever effects the potion has on him. I’m f Snape was wary and displeased about giving Harry the potion, I can only imagine Harry’s reaction. Poor kid.
Loving this story so far! Great job.
Fantastic start! I love it so far, everyone is I character, and your descriptive writing is just right. I’m excited for this story.
Awesome chapter. Cant wait for more!
I really like your writing and story-telling. I look forward to your updates.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 20 Sep 2018 3:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow! What has Dumbledore done to Harry? My guess is some polyjuice potion to change him so he is safe but I'm probably wrong. Can't wait to find out, hint, hint. Thank you for the chapter
| Title: Chapter 1
| 20 Sep 2018 2:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great start to the story and a dramatic ending.
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