| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 09 Jul 2022 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This is so beautifully written, and the chapters are wonderfully long and rich.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 08 Oct 2018 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very sad but well written chapter. I like that Severus is becoming sympathetic despite himself. It would be lovely to hear Harry's side of the story.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 06 Oct 2018 6:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Sissi (Signed)
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This story is so good that I got a new password for my account just to tell you.
Reading this had me feel every emotion your characters felt, I just couldn't stop reading. Your plot is unique and interesting and I cannot wait for the new chapter.
All my love
Sissi
Great story so far. I look forward to more
I wonder if Severus will eventually convince Harry to take Occlumency with him, and if he does what effect that will have on his impression of Harry.
I'm not liking Dumbledore very much right now, there's no way he doesn't know Harry is being abused, at school and at home.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 24 Sep 2018 2:47 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Hey,
Just wanted to let you know I really like this story. I really like your Harry. Because abused and beaten down people often don't just suddenly become heros. Most of the time they are just awkward because they never learned how life really works. And I really can see this in your story. It makes me ache and hope.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 24 Sep 2018 1:20 pm
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like this! Keep it coming!
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 24 Sep 2018 12:40 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I like how Snape is marginally warming to Harry. It would be great to see him fix all the evils in Harry's life, but I suspect that is never going to happen and is probably not possible by this stage, but hopefully Snape can give the boy some tools to improve his lot.
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