| Title: Chapter 5: The Undeserving
| 28 Jul 2021 6:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A brilliant chapter thank you. Harry hid the fact that he knew he was a horcrux from Dumbledore and Severus, it would be interesting to know why he did this, and Severus should have guessed why he wanted Draco to kill him. I can’t wait to read more one this story, thank you for updating
At the same time that I LOVE this Snape, I hate him. I mean, he is the most "in character" Snape that I read in some time. His reactions, and opinion about Harry... Well, they are very realistic. But yes, I feel bad, poor Harry, another person in his life hurting him. I wish things where different for him, but it is what it is.
So yes, I LOVE this story and the characters. I hope you continue soon.
| Title: Chapter 4: The Deserving
| 18 Jan 2021 3:21 am
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| Reviewer: Aimer (Signed)
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Please continue, I would love it if you would
I hope that Severus will eventually adopt Harry and that he will call him daddy
| Title: Chapter 4: The Deserving
| 09 Oct 2018 10:23 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to have Harry's point of view here but I'm intrigued by the mysteries surrounding him. Dumbledore obviously has a lot of blame to take on for his condition and his hints are very tantalising. Thank you so much for continuing your wonderful story
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 08 Oct 2018 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very sad but well written chapter. I like that Severus is becoming sympathetic despite himself. It would be lovely to hear Harry's side of the story.
I'm glad that Harry is aware of Severus' phoniness, and aware that he is a horcrux... he's still like a lamb being led to the slaughter, but at least he is knowledgeable about where he is going and why. That... sorta... makes it better?
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 06 Oct 2018 6:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Sissi (Signed)
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This story is so good that I got a new password for my account just to tell you.
Reading this had me feel every emotion your characters felt, I just couldn't stop reading. Your plot is unique and interesting and I cannot wait for the new chapter.
All my love
Sissi
Great story so far. I look forward to more
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