| Title: Chapter 2: The Repercussions
| 26 Sep 2018 8:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like how you portray Severus' reaction. So often he turns mushy and sentimental with Harry but here he is doing something against his will and still disliking Harry. Thank you
I wonder if Severus will eventually convince Harry to take Occlumency with him, and if he does what effect that will have on his impression of Harry.
I'm not liking Dumbledore very much right now, there's no way he doesn't know Harry is being abused, at school and at home.
| Title: Chapter 1: The Accusation
| 24 Sep 2018 8:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written and an excellent start thank you
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 24 Sep 2018 2:47 pm
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| Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Hey,
Just wanted to let you know I really like this story. I really like your Harry. Because abused and beaten down people often don't just suddenly become heros. Most of the time they are just awkward because they never learned how life really works. And I really can see this in your story. It makes me ache and hope.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 24 Sep 2018 1:20 pm
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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I like this! Keep it coming!
| Title: Chapter 3: The Lies, The Truths
| 24 Sep 2018 12:40 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I like how Snape is marginally warming to Harry. It would be great to see him fix all the evils in Harry's life, but I suspect that is never going to happen and is probably not possible by this stage, but hopefully Snape can give the boy some tools to improve his lot.
This is a really good story!
I have a feeling that Snape's duplicity is going to wind up crushing both him and Harry, but maybe not, maybe something will intervene. Here's hoping!
Interesting and well written. I can't wait for an update. I hope they let Katie see the memory so she can vouch for Harry's innocence to other students. Blaise should see it too.
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