Great start! I'm keen for more.
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: The Boathouse
| 14 Oct 2018 10:44 am
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| Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Lovely start. Already eager to see how Severus and Harry will progress.
Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks! I'm glad to see interest in this story. I'm definitely writing more!
| Title: The Boathouse
| 13 Oct 2018 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very interesting start to a story. I would love to read more so please continue the story
Author's Response: Awesome. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Oh yes = more please. Great story idea.
Author's Response: Thanks! I just found a beta, so more is on the way! I'm glad you liked it!
The summary looks really good and so does this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing how Severus deals with going back to the past, things he's forgotten over the years and has to remember, etc, and how he forms a relationship with Harry. I hope it doesn't move too quickly.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! That's good feedback about the pacing, especially. They definitely have a long, slow road ahead to build trust, and I don't want to take any shortcuts with that. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic!
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