Great start! I love it so far. Great characterizations, dialogue, descriptions, mystery... everything. Superb first chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you a lot! Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good start, I like how you give information without spelling it out to us, very clever.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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