Cool chapter! I’m loving Harry’s growth and exploration of things, like how to write a letter to a loved one, or at least someone who cares. It’s great that Snape is taking it easy on Neville. Also really interesting to realize that Neville should know a lot about the properties of plant potions ingredients. I never realized that before. I’m really enjoying your story. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: It is rather puzzling that Neville is so bad at potions (probably it is because he gets nervous), as the plant ingredients shouldn't be a problem to him. Thanks for your comment!
| Title: Chapter 15
| 21 Jul 2019 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love the undertones of this story, very clever thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
happy that neville was able to answered a question & sad that he didn't earn points!! like that hermione point to harry that sirus seem more concern about severus, than every things else.
Author's Response: Neville deserved that. And I think Severus is able to recognize competence when he sees it, even in a Gryffindor. Yes, I think Hermione would quickly notice that Sirius shares James' irrational hatred of Severus.
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