I'm glad that Harry got something to eat, thanks to Snape. I wonder where Hedwig is? She might have been able to find Harry for those searching for him.
Oh no! Harry is in trouble now! I’m scared for him. I love the use of the doe patronus. It is so iconic but hardly ever used. So lovely, and smart of Snape. Fantastic writing. I’m loving this story.
Author's Response: Well, Snape does want to keep his patronus secret. But of course, when it is about saving Lily's child, it is appropriate to use it. It's the closest Harry gets (before the resurrection stone anyway) to meeting his mother, seeing as the doe likely consists of 90% memories of Lily.
Thank you!
Yikes, not good. Good trick with the patronus though. Now to catch a lost fawn.
Author's Response: Harry's willingness to follow mysterious patronuses is very helpful here!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 21 Jul 2019 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good description of how Harry feels and his desperate situation. I hope Severus finds him soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked the description. :)
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