Yikes, not good. Good trick with the patronus though. Now to catch a lost fawn.
Author's Response: Harry's willingness to follow mysterious patronuses is very helpful here!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 21 Jul 2019 7:40 pm
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Very good description of how Harry feels and his desperate situation. I hope Severus finds him soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked the description. :)
| Title: Chapter 4
| 21 Jul 2019 7:29 pm
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Very clever of Severus! Thank you for a great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 21 Jul 2019 7:23 pm
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Poor Harry, I’m surprised the Weasley parents didn’t explain to Harry what they were punishing him for or better still find out who was to blame. Thank you for a great chapter
Another great idea from you. I love reading Snape's thoughts.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Poor Harry :(
I want to hug him
Author's Response: No worries, he'll be okay. (But not get a hug. Snape isn't a hugger.)
Poor Harry :( I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love what you're doing with this story so far.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Poor Harry. I hope Sev finds him.
Author's Response: He will! Eventually.
Ohhh poor boy. He is so lost and confused. That sandwich could of been a trap. Maybe Tom will notice and mention it missing, and Severus will try to set a trap just like it. Lovely story. I really like how different it is, that the Weasleys didn't work out for Harry. Snape is smart, smarter than Harry by far. He'll be able to catch him. But then what? I look forward to reading about how and what happens next. Thank you so much for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you! There's a lot of stories with corporal punishment, and in most cases, it is Snape who does it - but in canon, there's no indication that he would do something like this, whereas it is hinted at that Mr. Weasley sometimes resorts to corporal punishment for the twins. (And he's clearly from a generation who considers it normal)
I just don't think Harry would react favourably to corporal punishment - he's too sensitive to just shrug it off like the Weasley boys apparently do, but also too Gryffindor-ish and rebellious to try and change his behaviour to avoid punishment.
I love it
Author's Response: Glad you like it.
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