Snape feels very in character, taking his time to save Harry! I loved this scene and your vivid description of Hydrus.
| Title: Chapter Two
| 29 Aug 2019 8:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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What an ending! Thank you so much a wonderful description of the “Merman”
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I’m glad you’re enjoying it!
Oh no, poor Harry! Well, at least he is in no danger of death now ... I hope!
Author's Response: Ahahaha lil Harry is safe!....or is he??
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Hahaha! I love it. Of course Snape wouldn't rescue Harry right away. I loved his thoughts and actions - very in character. The descriptions are fantastic. I wonder though why Harry isn't coughing and sputtering after breathing in water. Other than that, I enjoyed this chapter immensely. Thanks for writing and posting!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I’m glad you enjoyed this chapter! Oh good, I was worried that my version of snape wasn’t in character (dealing with a mer-snape is proving to be difficult in places ahahaha) oh I’m sorry! It is rather confusing at the moment with the constant jumping of POV with characters, hopefully that will simmer down soon enough now that Harry and snape have met up again. But Harry being seemingly fine when he wakes up will hopefully be explained in snapes POV in the next chapter! I am going somewhere with this story! trust me ahahaha. Thank you again for reading and reviewing!!
Sev finally gets his act together to save Harry and Harry is surprised by the “creature” that he screams. Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you! I’m so glad you’re enjoying it so far!
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