Title: Chapter Four
| 29 Mar 2022 8:28 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well done I lovedtheir interaction thank you for updating
oh my god, there's a new chapter— man, i'm in love with this fic, so happy to see it again! snape calling harry stick legs is killing me, and then there's harry calling him "fins" lmao.
Author's Response: Ahahaha! I’m sorry it took so long, sometimes I need a good kick up the behind to get me to start writing again. That is so so lovely to hear! It makes me so happy that you’re enjoying it! Ahaha thank you! The banter between these two so far has been very fun to write. I’m definitely storing up more nicknames for the two to use against eachother in chapters to come so if you can think of anymore yourself please let me know! Thank you for the review
These two… I wonder who drowned? Or if it was a lie designed to cover up Severus?
Author's Response: Ooh! That’s all to be revealed in time! But I do love the way your mind works.
I’m so happy you updated your wonderful story! Thanks for the terrific chapter. It was fun learning about the swim team of Hogwarts’ past, and seeing Snape be his typical self in class after the scene in the lake. I especially enjoyed Harry being so Slytherin at the chapter’s end. I wonder if his feint will work. I look forward to finding out and reading more of your terrific story whenever inspiration next strikes, however long or short that may be!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review! It really helps me- and gives me a lot more courage to continue writing! I’m so glad the chapter was entertaining! I worry my writing isn’t that enthralling at times ahaha especially when I’m trying to lead up to larger plot details! Ah yes! I really enjoyed writing Harry being a little bit cheeky, I think I may continue this little personality trait of his throughout the story. Thank you again! I’m already working on the next chapter now so hopefully it won’t be too long a wait as the last chapter!
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