I'm glad to see that you decided to continue the story. I would like to see how the rest of the staff deal with Lockhart.
Author's Response: Um, yeah. Lockhart has been ... dealt with. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 17 Aug 2019 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I’m rather torn, I’d love more of this story but I hope it can be finished as it is so good.
I love Harry’s innocence about what is normal and I think you have got it right he doesn’t understand and that is heartbreaking. I think Hermione was talking to Severus about his home life, I’d love to see what he does about that. Thank you for a great story
Author's Response: Thank you! I will do my best to actually finish the story!
I want to know if Lockhart actually went that letter, if he is as bad as Snape and Hermione think he is. So far, the story seems to be setting up for some sort of confrontation, where Snape can be hero. Harry’s thinking needs to be corrected too. Someone other than Hermione needs to look into what Harry thinks is normal. I think you should continue the story for a couple more chapters. End on some sort of resolution. All in all, I really like your characterizations. Very well done with the dialogue of the characters, every one seems to be in character and very reminiscent of their book versions from The Chamber of Secrets. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always try to keep people in character. :)
And yeah, I have ideas for more plot. Some things will come to light about Lockhart.
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