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Title: Chapter 12 05 May 2020 11:50 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    At least, Harry has already met Rose and likes her. The explanation for Harry's appearance should be interesting.
Title: Chapter 12 05 Nov 2019 12:01 am
Reviewer: krystarka (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful fic! I had seen it among the recent stories, some time ago, and I had promised myself to read it but then... um ... I forgot!
    Luckily I saw it after you published 'The Cursed Photograph', because I hated to lose it!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it and that you found it again.
Title: Chapter 12 23 Oct 2019 11:42 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah! The plot thickins!

    Lockhart... just gotta shake my head and be glad he's dead. What a mess. Poor Lily. I wonder that Lily was able to keep the pregnancy from James. I guess she used concealment charms? And delivered Rose during the summer?

    Poor Severus... having this baby dangling in front of him, wanting to be her dad at some point.

    Poor Harry feeling unloved and unwanted. Wow.

    This is deep. And complicated. I appreciate you coming up with it, and writing it in such a way as to make sense, and fit in, and be plausible. Well done.

    Great story. Thank you for writing and sharing it, and updating.

    Author's Response: I was thinking that she faked/provoked a fight with James to explain a separation for a couple of months and then made up with him. It is rather difficult to write such a deep story, I am more of a fun and light stuff type of person, but the idea wanted to be written, so ... I can only hope to do it justice. Thank you for commenting!
Title: Chapter 12 22 Oct 2019 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very revealing chapter and lots of hints of what might be the truth

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hmmm ... hints? I thought things were pretty clear. Should I make some bits and pieces more explicit?

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