I used to smoke. I understand Harry in this. I knew it was wrong, but with my dad, I just couldn't stay sober.
Oooh I liked this version of Harry, dark in a very understandable way. And as much as I like Snape it's so satisfying seeing him get called out for his hypocrisy. Great job!
I love the Harry in this. I would love another chapter. Or I just wrote a challenge that I think you would blow out of the water! Either way I want more of your writing!
Author's Response: Hello and thank you for reading! I'm beyond glad that you liked this story, also, I checked out your challenge and I am IN LOVE. I already have scenes and everything planned out in my head, I just hope I can get them down on paper as soon as I can, when I have free time :)
Happy reading and stay tuned!
Ooooooh! So dark! Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Cigarette Daydreams
| 29 Aug 2020 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Oh my God I absolutely am in love. That was brilliant. A powerful,honest, truthful, confident Harry taking on Snape and Snape looking like th petty childish grudge hating fool he usually is-- it was brilliant beginning to end. And what Harry did at the end both threatening snapes life and THEN saying give me my cigarettes and go away, your shifts over-- that was top-notch writing there. I'd pay to read a full story of that!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for this flattering review! and sorry if it took me...quite a long time to respond. I'm only just trying to get back on my feet and keep up with my stories here and start writing regularly again. who knows, maybe I'll write a follow-up to this story soon! thank you, and I hope you stay safe~
I like this Harry not taking shit from snape
Author's Response: he liked it very much too :)
thanks for reading!
| Title: Cigarette Daydreams
| 29 Aug 2019 6:13 am
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| Reviewer: Aimer (Signed)
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Wooooww so intriguing!! I wish that there was another chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Hope you are safe and well! Never say never :)
| Title: Cigarette Daydreams
| 25 Aug 2019 3:59 am
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| Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
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I was beginning to not like Harry at the end but I suppose he’s been through too much for people to expect him to not be emotionally changed. Snape! You saw everything and have no ounce of sympathy? This is why Harry’s like he is.
Great story, thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks a world for reading and liking this story! Sorry if the response is a bit late, but I hope you are doing well! Stay tuned~
| Title: Cigarette Daydreams
| 21 Aug 2019 2:21 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah! Intense. Great emotions, powerful delivery. Well done.
Well...Clearly, I didn’t see the bold “the end” at the bottom. Very sorry ahaha
Nevertheless it was a very compelling one shot that clearly left me wanting more to the story ahahaha
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