I’ve read your awesome story before, but somehow didn’t review. So I’m going to fix that this time around. This first chapter is so fun, and so beautifully written! I love Dumbledore’s rationale for his latest plot.
Poor Severus. I hope he has some fire whiskey handy. It sounds like he needs it. Your premise is interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: sorry for the late response! but unfortunately dumbledore liberated him of his stash so he's gonna have to manage without alcohol :/
I really love Harry talking to Sirius. I think that's really special. It feels realistic.
Dumbledore is such a busybody. Every single version of Dumbledore has this quality. Like seriously, has he nothing better to do than mess with people's lives? xD
Author's Response: you'd think that someone who's the supreme mugwump of the international confederation of wizards, chief warlock of the wizengamot, head of hogwarts, vigilant group leader, and god knows what else would have better things to do than meddle with people's lives, but no. he doesn't.
Muah hahahah! I love this premise. Fantastic! Your Snape is so in character. All the others too. Well done! Nice start.
Author's Response: ahh thank you!!! it's always nice to hear that the mental model I have the characters matches others
| Title: Chapter 1
| 01 Oct 2019 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very interesting start to the story 😊
Author's Response: thank you!
Oh, this is either going to go well or horribly wrong...
Author's Response: I feel like this is a “both” situation ;)
Please do post the rest. This could be quite delicious.
Author's Response: Oh I’ll definitely post everything I have written (about 12k words including what’s already posted) at some point, I just would like to edit it before I post it so it’s actually readable lmao
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