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Title: Chapter 4 03 Jul 2023 10:03 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ginny is quite determined when she is after something! Thanks for the great chapter.
Title: Chapter 4 09 Oct 2019 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter with Neville interaction. I have a question, is Harry quidditch captain in this story?

    Author's Response: ah that's actually a really good question that I will probably write the answer into the next chapter...thanks for pointing out that detail, I completely forgot about that!
Title: Chapter 4 07 Oct 2019 3:03 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Ginny is being so mature and insightful, its gonna be so great to see their relationship develop along the story.
    I guess Alfonse will remain a prick for the first few chapters (ir first many chapters, given the way he's not putting ANY effort into getting to know Harry.), he makes me want to kick him. Dumbledore's words hold so damn true, "You see what you expect to see."
    I love the way that Neville just solved the problem passingly, as if he couldnt even see what the problem was.
    Would we see Luna too???? Soon????
    I really like the story so far!

    Author's Response: You can definitely expect to see a lot of Ginny! I wouldn’t expect much romantically because Harry just has too much going on, but who knows the characters have minds of their own sometimes lol. Snape will definitely be a prick for a while yet- he won’t suddenly wake up one day and be like huh I completely misjudged Harry Potter for the past five years!!! Time to mentor him!!!! Like it just doesn’t work like that. We simply have to stan Neville- he’s the only sane one out here djjdjd. You can definitely expect to see Luna soon, but between Harry’s self esteem issues and her own newness to friendship, they’re gonna need an impetus to further their relationship which I fully intend to give them. Thank you so much for the review!!

    Author's Response: You can definitely expect to see a lot of Ginny! I wouldn’t expect much romantically because Harry just has too much going on, but who knows the characters have minds of their own sometimes lol. Snape will definitely be a prick for a while yet- he won’t suddenly wake up one day and be like huh I completely misjudged Harry Potter for the past five years!!! Time to mentor him!!!! Like it just doesn’t work like that. We simply have to stan Neville- he’s the only sane one out here djjdjd. You can definitely expect to see Luna soon, but between Harry’s self esteem issues and her own newness to friendship, they’re gonna need an impetus to further their relationship which I fully intend to give them. Thank you so much for the review!!
Title: Chapter 4 07 Oct 2019 2:27 am
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Ginny here, even more so. She's trying so hard to help. It's very realistic to see Harry here trying to disappear in his textbooks. Avoiding the pain is probably the most accurate way that people deal with a death. Not sure if there is any way to cope with death. I personally haven't figured it out. You just keep living with the bad days and the good days.

    I'm sure Harry will have the same struggles in the future. :(

    Author's Response: yeah my Harry will never miraculously be Okay, he'll struggle with his self-esteem and loss, but I do intend to have him gradually get better, especially since his support system will improve (especially once ron + hermione pull their heads out of their butts lol) im glad you think the way Harry is handling things is realistic though, i've never suffered the same level of loss he has so I'm mostly drawing on reading experience and the smaller losses i've suffered
Title: Chapter 4 07 Oct 2019 2:06 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really want to ask Ginny if she ever thought that maybe Harry would be better off having less in his plate. Running a group is hard. Doing it on top of other tasks is hard. It annoys me that everyone assumes that the group was just going to continue. Maybe he needs time to grieve. That being said, I love the chapter and the passionate response it drew from me.

    Author's Response: honestly she probably didn't ever think that because she's fallen prey to assuming that everyone is just like her, and for her overloading her plate is how she copes with things, it gives her less time to think about the crappy things she went through. idk i just like Ginny a lot, so i tend to defend her sldkfjs anyways, I'm glad you liked it and are passionate about my writing (!!!!!)

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