Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 8 03 Jul 2023 10:30 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Eli doesn’t keep believing Harry’s story - though that was a clever cover story.
Title: Chapter 8 19 Nov 2019 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    He really is determined not to see any good sidevto Harry! Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: yup! as I like to say, he's got his head firmly planted in his ass and it will not be Easy to surgically remove
Title: Chapter 8 31 Oct 2019 9:50 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL Dumbledore's influence could ruin anyone. I love Snape's ruminations and thoughts. I'm glad that Snape was able to see Harry's bruises - I'm glad that he had a cool potion to share. I wonder if Harry will spread word about that particular balm, or ask for it again.

    I think any of his friends would of caught on about his "Whomping Willow" lie. He wasn't around flying without them at any time, was he? And he should be too good of a flier to ever be hit... I wonder if his lie will ever come up again.

    What will it take for Snape to separate Harry from his Dad? I love that McGonagall threatened detention for so long. Go McGonagall!!

    I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks for writing and sharing!

    Author's Response: the specific potion Snape shared probably won’t show up again, but the seed has been planted that Snape either has unusual access to potions or is unusually good at brewing- and that Will be important later! And yeah anyone who knows anything about Harry would have been instantly suspicious if they’d been treated to that lie, but Snape still doesn’t know Harry yet! And if it makes you feel better I know precisely when/how snape will have his Harry=/=James revelation.... :D thank you for the review!!
Title: Chapter 8 30 Oct 2019 12:33 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love that you are writing Sev’s perception based on the information he has and his preconceived notions.

    Author's Response: thank you! and I really enjoy third person limited pov because the way a character narrates tells you a lot about them- especially when you have other character's pov's to to compare to. thank you for the review!

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