Love that Eli is seeing a fully capable and engaged Neville!
That was a neat lesson. Harry should have gone into teaching. The lesson was fun, imaginative and kept his students focused. Looking forward to Eli's take on it.
Author's Response: who says this harry won't go into teaching ;)
Great chapter!!! I hope you update soon.
I understand Seamus' suspicion, but I'm afraid Eli might disapprove😉.
Author's Response: haha yeah i was picturing more bewilderment from snape than anything else but who knows, i don't think i cover his precise thoughts on that so feel free to interpret yourself :) thank you for the review!
| Title: Chapter 15
| 21 Nov 2019 8:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I loved the deflection and the beach balls. I am wondering if Severus is distracted by the Harry’s teaching or the shield charm? Thank you again for a wonderful story
Author's Response: im glad you like the lesson! it took me a while to think up something practical for the lesson so that's really good to hear. as for your wondering, it'll either be in the next chapter or the one after :D thank you for the review!!!
Hmm, Is something going to happen out of the students' suspicions of McGonagall?
Wonder what Eli, I mean Severus, (I get really confused now!) was thinking about Harry, can't wait to find out. Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response: not really since they're more speculating for the fun of it than out of any real suspicion , and you'll find out what snape was thinking in the next chapter! thank you for the review!
Awesome!
Author's Response: thank you!
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