The dive Severus took into his mind was so well crafted. I was cheering for his many important revelations. I look forward to seeing what he does with them!
How underwhelming, to read so many chapters of a story about interpersonal psychological and trauma-related issues only to find the whole conflict swept away by magic rather than any of the difficult, natural psychological legwork. I do hope that there is enough drama between the two left to bear some of the hopes one has for a story like this through to the end.
I liked Snape's breakthrough. The idea of the memories and bottles was a nice one. Harry and James' bottles looking the same in his mind made sense. Having to go through each memory, even superfically gave him a clear view of his prejudice.
Author's Response: im really glad you liked it!! this was one of those things i had a clear vision of for /ages/ before i finally got to write it, so hearing that people liked it is so gratifying :D
| Title: Chapter 17
| 01 Dec 2019 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent way for Severus to realise what a fool he has been. I loved the way he changed Lily’s name and placed James’ bottle near her. I wonder when he will realise why Harry is so thin?
Author's Response: im really glad you liked it! it felt great to finally write this chapter and i thought that lily's name and putting james' bottle near hers was a good way for him to show his closure over the situation. and he will definitely be realizing that, but not for a couple chapters yet! thank you for the review!
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