I have to say, not a big fan of the memory organisation plot, feels like a bit of a cop out for his behaviour and too easy, just my opinion. HOWEVER, the writing was exquisite and really easy to understand, so cool how you managed to explain it so clearly! Amanda speaking so candidly to Sev was hilarious, I hope her situation improves for her sake, she deserves more. And I was NOT ready for Sev to change back, so glad Dumbledore had to leave. Too bad for him but, well, he's gotta suffer for our amusement. Heh. Thanks for the much longer chapter!
Author's Response: you're entitled to your opinion, but I'm glad you thought my "cop out" was well written and understandable. Amanda's definitely going to be reoccurring– she was too much fun to write to let her go that easily. And Severus definitely has more things to come to terms with before I'll let him become /himself/ again.
Great chapter. Poor Sev will have to wait to talk to Dumbledore. I can't wait to read the next chapter that you'll publish and
Kisses Raffaella 😉
Author's Response: he sure will have to wait! it'll be good for him tho ;) thank you for the review!!!
Hmmm, I wonder how many weeks are “a few?”
Author's Response: in all honesty, however many is convenient for the plot lskdfjlksdjf
I'd feel sorry for Snape, finding out he has to remain a teenager and all, but I'm too busy snickering at his bad luck.
Author's Response: big mood!!!! literally me when i was writing the end of this chapter
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