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Title: Chapter 7 27 Oct 2019 3:17 pm
Reviewer: Rocking_Unstable (Signed) [Report This]
    Super awesome. Can't wait for a new update. And I can't wait for Severus to start noticing Harry's homelife being off

    Author's Response: snape is a very stubborn person and he fully believes that harry is spoiled like james was at this point in the fic. he'll have a moment of revelation at some point, but not for a while yet. thank you for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 6 27 Oct 2019 11:12 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Woah haha. That was some quick stepping by Snape to explain his backstory adequately. I wonder if Harry suspects anything. And how is Severus going to get out of wanting to be an Auror? Maybe he should just go with it.

    Maybe his mom refuses to let him? With the war going on, he should feel it necessary to "learn" defense though. Maybe that will give him reason to pop into the defense club.

    I bet Snape will be expected to turn in all his assignments. The other students would notice if he didn't.

    I'm enjoying this story. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: I figured that Snape would be quite skilled in thinking on his feet and coming up with a feasible story after being a spy. Harry's got a lot going on, and since the entire fic has been over the course of a single weekend, he doesn't really have reason to think something is up- in my head, professors can take weekends off and periodically do so. you've definitely guessed how I'm going to get him into the da! thank you for reviewing!!
Title: Chapter 7 27 Oct 2019 11:01 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay McGonagall! I love how she broke the news to Severus - bonding and teaching. Heheheheh. Maybe Snape will discover Harry has a knack for potions after all. Will Snape do as McGonagall asked and separate his memories of Harry from James and review them?

    Is Dumbledore worried about Defense using boggarts and Snape's identity being revealed? Or something else in defense? He could bond and tutor in defense more. Or maybe Dumbledore is keeping Snape from experiencing the worst of the incompetent defense teacher? Wait, I forgot, who is the defense teacher? It would be hilarious if it were Lupin.

    I'm really enjoying your characterization of Snape and all the things he has to suffer through. It is really amusing to see him react. I guess I am like McGonagall in that way.

    I'm really enjoying your story. Thanks for writing and sharing it!

    Author's Response: you'll have to read and find out about the memories! and i'm definitely leaning towards Harry having some skill at at least the practical parts of potions when he has a better teacher. my dumbledore tends to be a force for chaos so trying to attribute rational motivations to his actions won't really go anywhere. the defense professor is an OC because I arbitrarily decided that when i first started writing this years ago and I've been trying to keep it as intact as possible. I'm glad you like my characterization of snape! he definitely has to go Through it before he'll wake up and start being a reasonable person- although, not to spoil anything, he's currently got something else going on interfering with his rationality. thank you so much for the kind review!
Title: Chapter 6 26 Oct 2019 1:00 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    So why do I get the idea that this dealing is permanent and no one told Sev?

    Author's Response: nah I'm evil but I'm not /that/ evil sldkfjksld
Title: Chapter 5 24 Oct 2019 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very interesting chapter. Harry’s ventures into Voldemort’s mind sound horrific.
    I think we should leave it to the author to decide how you want to update your story whichever suits you best is fine by me, I just hope you can continue your fantastic work

    Author's Response: You're probably right, but I do like to take y'all's opinions into consideration y'know? And it's definitely supposed to be, I'm going to be touching on it more in the next chapter (i.e. chapter 7) so we've not seen the end of it, unfortunately for Harry
Title: Chapter 5 24 Oct 2019 3:29 pm
Reviewer: AbsintheAddict (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting concept, I hope you continue updating this story. Good job! ;) (Sorry for the awkard review, it's been a while but I wanted to encourage you)

    Author's Response: I definitely plan to keep writing! and thank you very much I love the encouragement :)
Title: Chapter 5 21 Oct 2019 8:11 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, yay! Snape has survived an evening in the Gryffindor common room! I really love how Harry took charge, and just yelled at everyone to stop- and they listened! He really has some leadership qualities, and they are really not explored or expressed enough in most stories.

    I could imagine McGonagall doing a bed check, that's hilarious. And cute.

    Poor Harry having to go through Voldemort's memories. That's got to leave a gross feeling, and haunted mind from the terrible memories.

    I'm enjoying this story! Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: omg you get it!!!! i see harry leading the DA and im like- those are some Serious leadership abilities and i rarely see that showcased in fic, so yknow I had to include it in mine! and when you have a flight risk as serious as Snape would be that first night, you do what you must! and yeah I definitely intend to explore the after effects of that further, but Harry is in some serious denial right now so he's not quite ready for it. thank you for the review!!!
Title: Chapter 5 21 Oct 2019 1:35 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    This will be interesting. I fear Sevwill be in trouble when Harry finds out who he is.

    Author's Response: that is pretty far down the line thankfully, so I actually don't really know how it's going to happen yet either
Title: Chapter 1 10 Oct 2019 3:35 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus. I hope he has some fire whiskey handy. It sounds like he needs it. Your premise is interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: sorry for the late response! but unfortunately dumbledore liberated him of his stash so he's gonna have to manage without alcohol :/
Title: Chapter 4 09 Oct 2019 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter with Neville interaction. I have a question, is Harry quidditch captain in this story?

    Author's Response: ah that's actually a really good question that I will probably write the answer into the next chapter...thanks for pointing out that detail, I completely forgot about that!

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