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Title: Chapter 3 09 Oct 2019 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good meeting as it wouldn’t have been believable if Alphonse had been approachable and friendly. Thank you you for updating.

    Author's Response: "Even though he's been ordered to befriend Harry, he doesn't have to do a very good job of it, now does he." -Snape's thought process, probably. And thank you very much for taking the time to review all the chapters! It means a lot
Title: Chapter 2 09 Oct 2019 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very amusing chapter I love the thought of Severus’s robes being Gryffindor!

    Author's Response: and his place of residence, and where he eats, and, and this a real kicker, the classes he will attend will be Gryffindor :D
Title: Chapter 4 07 Oct 2019 3:03 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Ginny is being so mature and insightful, its gonna be so great to see their relationship develop along the story.
    I guess Alfonse will remain a prick for the first few chapters (ir first many chapters, given the way he's not putting ANY effort into getting to know Harry.), he makes me want to kick him. Dumbledore's words hold so damn true, "You see what you expect to see."
    I love the way that Neville just solved the problem passingly, as if he couldnt even see what the problem was.
    Would we see Luna too???? Soon????
    I really like the story so far!

    Author's Response: You can definitely expect to see a lot of Ginny! I wouldn’t expect much romantically because Harry just has too much going on, but who knows the characters have minds of their own sometimes lol. Snape will definitely be a prick for a while yet- he won’t suddenly wake up one day and be like huh I completely misjudged Harry Potter for the past five years!!! Time to mentor him!!!! Like it just doesn’t work like that. We simply have to stan Neville- he’s the only sane one out here djjdjd. You can definitely expect to see Luna soon, but between Harry’s self esteem issues and her own newness to friendship, they’re gonna need an impetus to further their relationship which I fully intend to give them. Thank you so much for the review!!

    Author's Response: You can definitely expect to see a lot of Ginny! I wouldn’t expect much romantically because Harry just has too much going on, but who knows the characters have minds of their own sometimes lol. Snape will definitely be a prick for a while yet- he won’t suddenly wake up one day and be like huh I completely misjudged Harry Potter for the past five years!!! Time to mentor him!!!! Like it just doesn’t work like that. We simply have to stan Neville- he’s the only sane one out here djjdjd. You can definitely expect to see Luna soon, but between Harry’s self esteem issues and her own newness to friendship, they’re gonna need an impetus to further their relationship which I fully intend to give them. Thank you so much for the review!!
Title: Chapter 4 07 Oct 2019 2:27 am
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Ginny here, even more so. She's trying so hard to help. It's very realistic to see Harry here trying to disappear in his textbooks. Avoiding the pain is probably the most accurate way that people deal with a death. Not sure if there is any way to cope with death. I personally haven't figured it out. You just keep living with the bad days and the good days.

    I'm sure Harry will have the same struggles in the future. :(

    Author's Response: yeah my Harry will never miraculously be Okay, he'll struggle with his self-esteem and loss, but I do intend to have him gradually get better, especially since his support system will improve (especially once ron + hermione pull their heads out of their butts lol) im glad you think the way Harry is handling things is realistic though, i've never suffered the same level of loss he has so I'm mostly drawing on reading experience and the smaller losses i've suffered
Title: Chapter 3 07 Oct 2019 2:16 am
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    The only thing I feel is off about this chapter is addressing Severus as Alphonse in the prose. I think Severus would still think of himself as Severus, but also it makes it slightly difficult for the reader to follow along. Maybe it's just me, but I rather imagine Severus as a 16 year old. I get confused otherwise when I see Alphonse in anything other than dialogue. :)

    I love that he's like, "Where's the liquor?" LOL Severus has to drown his sorrows in a drink. I really love that Ginny is so protective of Harry. It's so refreshing to see a fiery version of her in fan fiction.

    Poor Harry. He really does need an adult on his team. Sev! You better be nicer next time!

    Author's Response: i really struggled a lot with deciding what to call him in prose, and I'm thinking that you may be right about that, so when I get a chance I'll probably go through and fix that. he's really goin through it and havin one last hurrah with his firewhiskey would be just the ticket!!!! if you like my version of Ginny, then buckle up for the next chapter! she features prominently :) and the ultimate goal of this fic is to get an adult on Harry's side, I'm itching for them to unite and stick it to dumbledore tbh but god knows when I'll get there lskdfjls
Title: Chapter 2 07 Oct 2019 2:09 am
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    I feel like this entire chapter is just a beautiful torture scene for Severus. That's what makes it fantastic. Heheh.

    Author's Response: you got me! that's what half this fic is going to be until he takes his head and removes it from the sand it is comfortably buried in sldkfjsdl
Title: Chapter 4 07 Oct 2019 2:06 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really want to ask Ginny if she ever thought that maybe Harry would be better off having less in his plate. Running a group is hard. Doing it on top of other tasks is hard. It annoys me that everyone assumes that the group was just going to continue. Maybe he needs time to grieve. That being said, I love the chapter and the passionate response it drew from me.

    Author's Response: honestly she probably didn't ever think that because she's fallen prey to assuming that everyone is just like her, and for her overloading her plate is how she copes with things, it gives her less time to think about the crappy things she went through. idk i just like Ginny a lot, so i tend to defend her sldkfjs anyways, I'm glad you liked it and are passionate about my writing (!!!!!)
Title: Chapter 1 07 Oct 2019 2:05 am
Reviewer: Anthezar (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love Harry talking to Sirius. I think that's really special. It feels realistic.

    Dumbledore is such a busybody. Every single version of Dumbledore has this quality. Like seriously, has he nothing better to do than mess with people's lives? xD

    Author's Response: you'd think that someone who's the supreme mugwump of the international confederation of wizards, chief warlock of the wizengamot, head of hogwarts, vigilant group leader, and god knows what else would have better things to do than meddle with people's lives, but no. he doesn't.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Oct 2019 2:23 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev isn’t even at the table for ten minutes and he is getting blamed. Amazing. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: keep in mind, ginny and harry are the epitome of angsty teenagers so they're gonna be irrational! and snape still very much has his head in the sand so he's not going to be the most rational either so this is gonna be a fun irrational stew for a while yet lmaoo
Title: Chapter 2 02 Oct 2019 9:12 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving it so far. The conniving Headmaster. Long suffering Snape. Prim McGonagall. Everyone is very much in character. I'm glad that Alfonse Snape doesn't look like Snape - his mannerisms would give him away. But who would expect Snape to be in Gryffindor? I'm looking forward to seeing what Snape will discover about Harry. Thanks for writing and posting!

    Author's Response: Yeah I knew when I set out to write this that I had to find a way to make sure Snape's alter ego looks nothing like him because he's definitely reluctant enough to do this in the first place that I just couldn't see him putting in the extra effort to make sure his mannerisms didn't give him away!!! And before Snape can discover anything about Harry he'll have to pull his head out of the sand which may be a bit difficult for him sldkfj

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