A different and interesting story
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! New chapter will be up soon!
I like the story very much and I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you do MaxiMars! I'm updating a new chapter in a few hours. Happy reading! :)
I love this!! The alteration between the dark 'present' scene and the dark-but-also-adorable 'past' scenes is brilliant. From your description, I didn't think I would like it, but I'd already read through all the other most recently updated fics on this site, so I decided to give this one a chance and it's AWESOME. Fix your description. It sounds like Harry is the new Voldemort, or something, and if it put me off, it's probably chasing others away, too. Keep it coming! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you do! I was actually thinking about changing the summary, and I promise to get around to it after updating the story in a few hours, I haven't even thought about how dark Harry seems in the summary, you're right! Writing the alternating scenes was such a joy, and they will prove essential as the story goes on. A new chapter will be up in a few hours, happy reading! :)
| Title: Chapter 2; Feather Party
| 11 Dec 2019 8:11 am
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| Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
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I'm so invested in this story, you have me on the edge of my seat for updates. The concept of Harry being at odds with Shacklebot intrigued me at first, like how could that possibly happen, and reading more has got me so many questions that I can't wait to be answered. Looking forward for more insight into Harry and Severus's domestic life and what happened. Love!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you like this story emrice! I really love writing stories that put characters at odds with each other depending on the situation. It has very tangible results, as is to be expected. A new chapter will be up in a few hours! With some answers AND a new insight into Sev and Harry's domestic life. Happy reading!
Oh boys... I like that Harry cracked Shacklebolt’s frame and the man still believes he knows what is going on.
Author's Response: I find it very likely to happen since Aurors wouldn't take a sixteen-year-old boy very seriously, especially one that is being interrogated. They have no idea what's coming tho! A new chapter will be up in a few hours :)
Intriguing!
Author's Response: It is, indeed! A new chapter will up be up in a few hours :)
| Title: Chapter 2; Feather Party
| 10 Dec 2019 9:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter you are bringing out the story incredibly skilfully thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind feedback as always Fmh! I'm glad you like this story. A new chapter will be up in a few hours! Happy reading :)
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