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Title: Chapter 5; Ollie Ollie Oxen Free 19 Jan 2020 2:33 pm
Reviewer: emrice (Signed) [Report This]
    “Do you know what they say, about paper cranes Harry?” his father had asked, seemingly a lifetime ago.

    Can I just say your transitions to the flashbacks are beautiful. They invoke images of movie scenes where the colour shifts to indicate a different timeframe perfectly.

    Cool idea, the two way mirror. Love the chapter, the plot gets intriguing by the minute.

    Author's Response: This review was an absolute delight for me, because when a reader fully understands the 'color' of a story, the sets, the whole mood surrounding it and can differentiate the scenes, then that means the story is turning out the way the writer intended them to be. Thank you for seeing the way this story was intended to be narrated. New chapter us up now!
Title: Chapter 5; Ollie Ollie Oxen Free 16 Jan 2020 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very good chapter. Lovely to have Tonks on board, one of my favourite characters, Warren however is so creepy he makes my skin crawl. Thank you so much

    Author's Response: I love having Tonks included in the story, she's one of my favorites too. Yes, Warren is indeed a character that deserves revulsion. We'll find out why in later chapters. Thank you for reading! New chapter is up now
Title: Chapter 5; Ollie Ollie Oxen Free 16 Jan 2020 2:35 am
Reviewer: MagnificentAndStrange (Signed) [Report This]
    This is soooooo good! I'd love to read more of this amazing fic!

    Author's Response: I'm so flattered that you liked this! More is on the way. Happy reading!
Title: Chapter 5; Ollie Ollie Oxen Free 14 Jan 2020 5:58 am
Reviewer: Ncis_Slythindor (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok I'm intrigued as to how Lupin found them! And how Lupin fits in to them being caught. I'm desperately hoping Shacklebolt will ferret out a plan to get Harry and Snape out of there! I'm not liking the thought of the ministry having either Harry or Sev. How made is he going to be that Harry has turned himself in for hope of his release?? I cant wait to see where you take this!!! Shacklebolt is thinking and I feel likes that's a good thing so here's hoping lol

    Author's Response: The next chapter is already well underway, so it will be up very soon! Lupin's connection and his character dynamic with the due is revealed in the next chapter. Yes, Shacklebolt knows that something is going on here, but is he smart to find out what? I won't spoil a thing for you, I would love for you to see where this is going! Happy reading, and as always you made my day!
Title: Chapter 5; Ollie Ollie Oxen Free 14 Jan 2020 4:53 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Did Remus turn them in?

    Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to wait and read! I know it sounds evil, but I promise the next update is going to be a lot sooner. Happy reading!

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