This is a masterpiece.
I think it is partly the unusual premise and mostly the way it is structured, with Harry telling the story and slowly unraveling more of the mystery. Another big factor is his internal dialogue; it is _superb_.
Author's Response: I'm very flattered that you think so! I spent a LOT of time outlining this baby, and I'm glad that you guys like it! Sorry for the long delay, real life has been VERY intruding as of late, but new update coming this week!
| Title: Chapter 8; the Sins of Our Fathers
| 10 Mar 2020 9:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a long update. I hope you have a great birthday
Author's Response: Thank you! And very sorry for the long delay, real life has been insane! New update coming this week!
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