It would have been so wonderful if it were a little bit longer after the long wait. Of course I am being selfish here. I know many won't agree with Dumbledore in this chapter, but for me he made a lot of sense even if he was obstinate about other things. There should be no concept of individuality in an army. Individuality should only be considered in case of civilians. In that case Harry is right, in my opinion, when he voices his opinion to save people. But then again only the army on the side of morality will consider this. Then the need for people like Severus Snape arises.
I'm cheering for both of you! Great chapter.
I still need to reread the chapter to understand exactly what occurred between Harry and Draco. Poor Cleo, standing all steadfast in the face of her charges. What will happen to her educational dreams? That's what I like about your fic. It's like real life: All is complicated, it never ends well, but somehow, it's always okay.
| Title: Verisimilitude
| 02 Sep 2020 8:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter with loads of angst thank you so much
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