| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Dec 2019 10:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent start to the story and a plausible reason why he couldn’t go to the Weasley house, thank you
Poor Harry. He really is in a jam. Though I think he could get away with ordering food without wearing his cloak if he has the money to pay for it.
Author's Response: True, he could, especially if he went to Diagon Alley to get muggle money (I don't think the goblins care about human age laws) and spent it in the muggle world. But his problem solving skills aren't evolved to that point yet (I always thought he and Ron were foolish to take the flying car, but suppose it's just child logic), and he is so used to not having enough food that he doesn't really use his brains to solve the problem. Snatching food while the Dursleys aren't looking is something he's used to.
Good start. Glad Harry at least has Hedwig to look out for him. Onwards to find out where Snape fits in to the story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Hedwig is such a good owl. She makes sure Harry gets something for Christmas from the Dursleys each year, even though the Dursleys rather wouldn't give him anything.
Nice chapter. I like your story and can't wait to read the sequel
Kisses from Raphael
Author's Response: Thank you! I just uploaded the next chapter.
Oh Harry. Stay safe.
Author's Response: No worries, he'll be fine.
In the end.
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