| Title: Chapter 4
| 31 Dec 2019 2:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like the way you wrote the chapter through Harry's eyes. He is so sick that he isn't thinking too clearly so, naturally, the person caring for him must be Dream Snape. Severus is doing a good job of reining in his tongue.
'Dream' Snape is certainly working hard to look after Harry. Don't think Harry will believe it when his fever subsides. BTW 'different' was meant as a compliment. Snape wasn't OOC, just well described as more than 1 dimensional. He is definitely slightly grumpy, certainly impatient, and some of his slightly rebellious thoughts made me smile.
Author's Response: Oh, I see, thank you!
It's always a bit of a challenge to not make him too nice. ^^
I love this story. I can't wait for it to continue.
I hope you spend good Christmas with your loved ones.
Greetings from your Italian fan Raffaella
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you have a merry Christmas, too. :)
I love how Harry believes it is all a Dream.
Author's Response: Thanks! I recall having had vivid nightmares when I had fever as child, and even being awake felt somewhat strange, so I thought Harry would think he's dreaming, especially since Snape is so strangely nice to him.
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