Harry must be astonished. Not only did Snape offer him extra food, he didn't make Harry clean up after the meal. That should start to get a bit of trust built up.
Author's Response: oh he absolutely is shocked– and it will definitely go a long ways towards building trust... once harry has moved past confusion with the help of other things that snape will do :D
| Title: Two Weeks Is A Long Time
| 16 Mar 2020 7:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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So lovely that he has a room that he can call home. Thank you for updating your brilliant story
Author's Response: i know :') minerva really did a great job with it! and thank you!!
| Title: Two Weeks Is A Long Time
| 13 Mar 2020 6:58 am
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| Reviewer: Dezra (Signed)
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You wrote such a great opening story that I am really looking forward to your finishing the sequel.
Author's Response: thank you!
Wow. After the way Snape treated Harry when he fetched him from the Dursleys, I thought he might give Severus a little credit for his good will. I guess it is going to be a long, bumpy road to acceptance.
Author's Response: i mean snape hasn't done anything yet that can't be waved away by "mcgonagall made him do it" so snape really hasn't made any progress towards the breakthrough that he needs to make before harry will start to trust (though once he does manage that, it probably won't take too long before harry fully trusts him slkdfj)
That was good. Harry may be uncomfortable with Snape but at least he won't be abused. And he can't say the Severus wouldn't be able to handle an attack. I look forward to the confrontations with the Dursleys.
Author's Response: all very true!! although in harry's mind, i doubt snape is all that much better than the dursley's since snape did spend a good 5 years bullying and deriding him followed by a pretty sharp betrayal– they've got a lot to talk about
Harry, Harry, Harry. You REALLY need to talk to someone uninvolved. I hope he gets some help before he does himself some harm.
Author's Response: he does need to talk to someone :'(
I wonder if Minerva could intercede for Severus. Harry listens to her. It isn't like Snape had much of a choice in becoming Eli and he was a good friend to Harry as Eli.
Author's Response: the way i see it, Minerva is very busy at the moment, so while she would at least attempt to intercede if she knew, the only way for her to find out is for snape to tell her, which i think he would be reluctant to do, preferring to at least attempt to resolve the situation himself first
| Title: Obligatory Train Ride Transition
| 07 Mar 2020 9:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely welcome for Harry! Thank you for updating
Author's Response: lovely is certainly one word for it! and you're very welcome
| Title: Sometimes Losing People... Is Worse
| 07 Mar 2020 9:38 pm
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Thank you a very well written chapter. Poor Harry, he is trying to do the right thing but is making everyone miserable around him
Author's Response: he is trying to do the right thing, though i wouldn't go so far as to say that everyone around him is miserable, more that they're worried about him
| Title: Prologue
| 07 Mar 2020 9:25 pm
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Great that you are writing a sequel, fantastic start to the story thank you
Author's Response: im glad you agree! and thank you
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