This is lovely. So well written, and a beautiful story.
I cried. Beautiful story. I hope you write a sequel someday.
Wow. At the conclusion of the story, I felt stunned. This story has such amazing depth that it strikes to the very heart of it all. I’m blown away.
wow... I have read a lot of fanfiction in my time... this might be the best one I’ve come across. So very well written, your style is breathtaking... then the story itself is heart wrenching in the best way. I absolutely adore this, perfectly paced and realistic, mature... I enjoy all kinds of fanfiction, even the silly stories but every now and then there’s a story like this that just... wow. Amazing. Thank you for writing.
| Title: Where the Heart is
| 01 Jan 2021 7:52 am
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| Reviewer: dex (Signed)
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OOF I'M CRYING!!! Absolutely wonderful. Thank you for sharing!
That was absolutely wonderful. I can waste thousands of words bandying around an idea and never get so close to what I mean, nor produce something so effectively believable. Thank you for sharing your work.
Author's Response: i don't check these often so i didn't see this but thank you! i'm happy you liked it. i'm sure that's not true, though - your writing uniquely your own and that makes it meaningful in ways different from mine, as a conduit for my own personal lived experiences. however long you've been writing, you'll always keep improving (i've been writing as a hobby for roughly a decade and professionally for a while now too, but i still see positive trends when i look back on professional and non-professional work alike even from just a few months ago^^). take care and keep writing! :D
| Title: Where the Heart is
| 12 Jul 2020 4:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Tedi (Signed)
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Friend, I'm more than a decade late and you probably won't even read this but damn... that was good.
| Title: Where the Heart is
| 03 May 2020 11:17 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story and very insightful into the characters, thank you
Sequel? Pretty please? I really enjoyed this!
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