I like your take on Harry's psychology. Took him quite a while to accept that he could get away from the Dursleys. (And should)
I love this one. You took some time to develop their relationship in a believable way.
Oooh, you do so love tugging on the heartstrings, don’t you? :) And you know what? You’re damn good at it. I love that this story dealt with similar things to “From Grace”, but went about it much differently and had different end results. Yet your characters were still as canon here as they were there. Takes a whoooole lotta talent to pull off something like that! I enjoyed this story just as much and I loved the premise of Harry writing letters, and Snape discovering what about, which slowly leads into the Dursley’s treatment, and trying to get Harry away from there... it unfolded so naturally. I still can’t get over how beautifully done it was that Snape didn’t ever “whisk him” away like many stories do. He gives Harry a choice - one that he struggles with. It’s very fitting given Harry’s age; where we are in the timeline. It also made Harry’s ultimate choice that much more meaningful. I got choked up about the “home” line! Ooh ooh and laughed pretty hard at Harry just talking out loud to the Order like “babysitting me must be so boring” trying to elicit a response and out swoops Snape xD Classic! Please please share more of your superb writing soon!
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