Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Coccyx 31 Jan 2023 2:38 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for your lovely characterizations.
Title: Coccyx 08 May 2020 12:15 am
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    I agree with other the other reviews. this is brilliantly written and imagined. Thank you for all the looking in a dictionary and translating latin. Yes, you really need a Beta; just to change the glaring tenses and half finished sentences, not your wonderful style. You have caught Luna in flights of fancy and Snape in wit. I wish you would give us more of the quotes from the H.B.Prince.
    I felt sadness when he wept, in his recognising the son in the mother's sound. Dear Snape. Loved his swift defense of Harry in the class. and his attentiveness to his pupils.
    I wish you hadn't burned the H.B. Prince's book from year six -
    all those quotes gone up in smoke.
    Reading on with pleasure.
    Missing Alan Rickman so very much, yet glad I don't have to worry about how he would have dodged corona - he was in danger from it. Born on Febr. 21. 1946.
    Ever remembered with fondness.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review. I have a beta (thanks to the lovely people in this site), and from now on I hope that I'll manage to exceed the limit that my grammar mistakes placed before me :P. You certainly will receive more quotes of HBP. I'm planning to merge them in the plot, but I think I'll even post another fic which is dedicated just for them, perhaps including Severus & Lily flashbacks. Alan Rickman was a good man, but at least we can take comfort that he doesn't need to fight CoViD. There are worst fates than death.
Title: Coccyx 07 May 2020 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter

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